Short Film Pitch & Feedback

In this pitch I discuss, audience, costume and the idea of my film as a whole.


After delivering this pitch we asked if anyone had any questions or suggestions for improvements. The class suggested we ensure an age gap between the General and the Lieutenant
so it is clear to the audience who is in charge also making them appear as the wiser one out of the two. We will take this into consideration when developing our film by trying to find two actors with a suitable age gap willing to fill the role.