Evaluation Question 3

After collecting all my audience feedback it was clear to see what the positives and negatives are of my film:
Positives:
well thought out script
good concept
smooth editing - no noticeable mistakes in editing
well chosen music
wide range of shots

Negatives:
bad acting
the script was on screen
there was only one location
costumes could've been more accurate

Overall I feel these comments are honest and fair, we were limited on time and had a lot of complications when it came to having free time leading to a lack of quality in our final piece.
if given a second chance to complete my coursework I would've planned a lot more efficiently so that the piece appeared polished, there would be a varied amount of locations, a battle scene on a local beach, a more war themed set in general and the costumes would fit the ranks of the soldiers. additionally if we had more time available we would've been able to learn the script, furthermore improving our acting as well.